The best thing in life is....LOV and friends! Love is probably the best feeling you can receive and give.Without love there wouldn't be anything, every single thing is created by love. Even the bad things come from love, for example, the love for destruction makes bombs, the love for power makes money, and the love for territory creates war.Although the love I'm talking about is the good one, the one that makes us be blind and just be simply crazy. The love that makes me feel incredible and that I'm in another planet. That is one of the BEST things in the world.
Friends are like family but better, we get to chose them. I personally couldn't live without my friends, they are everything to me. I never keep anything from my friends, I think the probably know me better than I know myself. Not only that, but they are always there for me when I need them. Friends help you when you're in need and will always be by your side no matter what. Friends simply love you no matter what. A friend is like your brother or sister, but even better.
Priscila your two things that you chose are very important. I totally i agree with you. Love and friendship what else could you ask for. In a friendship you find love so it all comes together. I love how you explain what "love" really is. I love how you say: Even the bad things come from love, for example, the love for destruction makes bombs, the love for power makes money, and the love for territory creates war" because theres not only happy love but all kids like you explained. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteOk, this paragraph was great, I love you ideas and I agree with you, that the best thing in life is Love and friends.
ReplyDeleteWell, I would put family to. I liked that you put your honest opinion. I really liked that you put very challenging words
in your assignment. Your sentences of LOVE were great , interesting and very honest. The only thing that I would
suggest is that you would put more information, facts or personal opinions. Priscila, you did a great job! I loved your
paragraph,I hope next time you put more things.
Dear Prisci: I liked your essay a lot. I agree with you. In life what we only need is love. Even in bad things. Like you mention even wars, which sounds almost impossible but its true. Also when we are facing very rough moments, we think about it, and the truth is that what we only have is love. What I like of your post is that is objective, and you try to explain a very positive idea of love. One of my favorite parts on your post is when you talk about friends. Friends are family but better, we get to choose them. That was a great quote. Your post its very emotive, I really enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!
Love youuuuuu so much!!
you qare right! the ebst thing in life is love, and i think rthere isnt nothing greater than the power of love. Love can join every nationn every contionent, place, city, country etc. I think love is the greatest force in the world. The greatest thing ever!(:
ReplyDeleteits awesome that you got this topic of lvoe, and i knwo tyou are a very inspirational person ans you love everything that has to do with love. Priscila! great paragraph i think you are expressint the ideal or the idea you whant us to get. The paragraph is catchy, and attracts my attention fast. And this is becaus the main topic. When its aobut love, it attracts the people because they feel anemotion towards it. I feel i wanted to say more things youy could add to your paragraph but there arent that much. IOts pretty much great, jusdt put more emotion and understand what you are saying. Once you do this youw paragraph wouold be more than awesome!
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